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So I must confess. I am not happy with the title, 'The Civilization.'
The original title of the novel was "The Civilization of Light & Dark."
For the life of me, I cannot recall how I chose the title. I do recall there being a previous title, 'The Land of the Gods.' It sounded too much like a 'real-world spiritual place,' and many such places in the real world used that title.
I do believe it came from Ancient Egypt, what they called the land of Punt.
Many times over, beta readers and editors suggested a change of title. I tried a few. "Dark Was the Night" was a working title for a while. It sounded too horror-coded. See similar problems with The Absence of Light and The Forsaken Lands.
I ended up using "Civilization" as a working title. I expected my publisher to force me to change the title.
They never did.
Does 'The Civilization' make sense? It still sounded horror-coded. Granted there are horrors in the story, the title left much to be desired.
What does the title mean? is a question I got a few times. It's hard to explain. What is civilization? A stable or organized society, distinguished by advanced architecture, systems, and practices.
What am I trying to say with the title?
The long-form works better, I would say.
The Civilization of Light & Dark means only that a society is torn between light and dark forces, good and evil, survival and annihilation, and knowledge and wilderness.
I continue to call the novel The Civilization of Light & Dark.
The original title of the novel was "The Civilization of Light & Dark."
For the life of me, I cannot recall how I chose the title. I do recall there being a previous title, 'The Land of the Gods.' It sounded too much like a 'real-world spiritual place,' and many such places in the real world used that title.
I do believe it came from Ancient Egypt, what they called the land of Punt.
Many times over, beta readers and editors suggested a change of title. I tried a few. "Dark Was the Night" was a working title for a while. It sounded too horror-coded. See similar problems with The Absence of Light and The Forsaken Lands.
I ended up using "Civilization" as a working title. I expected my publisher to force me to change the title.
They never did.
Does 'The Civilization' make sense? It still sounded horror-coded. Granted there are horrors in the story, the title left much to be desired.
What does the title mean? is a question I got a few times. It's hard to explain. What is civilization? A stable or organized society, distinguished by advanced architecture, systems, and practices.
What am I trying to say with the title?
The long-form works better, I would say.
The Civilization of Light & Dark means only that a society is torn between light and dark forces, good and evil, survival and annihilation, and knowledge and wilderness.
I continue to call the novel The Civilization of Light & Dark.
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